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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?
1. Meanwhile, the new Highmage Jorelia and the wizards removed numerous artifacts from all of the targeted Towers and moved them to the Tower of Wayreth.
2. Meanwhile, Jorelia, the new Highmage, and the wizards removed numerous artifacts from all of the targeted Towers and moved them to the Tower of Wayreth.
1. Meanwhile, the new Highmage Jorelia and the wizards removed numerous artifacts from all of the targeted Towers and moved them to the Tower of Wayreth.
2. Meanwhile, Jorelia, the new Highmage, and the wizards removed numerous artifacts from all of the targeted Towers and moved them to the Tower of Wayreth.
Top answer
The second, with "the new Highmage" in the non-restrictive apposition. But the restrictive apposition in "the new Highmage Jorelia" is also fine.
- The second, with "the new Highmage" in the non-restrictive apposition.
- But the restrictive apposition in "the new Highmage Jorelia" is also fine.
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The second, with "the new Highmage" in the non-restrictive apposition. But the restrictive apposition in "the new Highmage Jorelia" is also fine.
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