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Joeham Posted 16 years ago
Vocabulary

Wordings for a Trophy

Hello,

This is first time into this forum and reason to join was to get the best wordings to put on a trophy for our distinguished guest speakers.I just framed one but if somebody could reframe it much better with appropriate words is appreciated.

IMTYC is an organization and the words in apostrphy is our theme.

" IMTYC is immensely proud to honor your valuable presence and unstinted support to Grace this blessed occasion for all of us " To Wake up and Shine".



I really hope to get much better wordings.

Thanks

Joe
  

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Hello, Joe-- and welcome to English Forums. You may not like what I suggest you do with this: shorten and simplify. The original is too long and florid.

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, Joe-- and welcome to English Forums.
  • You may not like what I suggest you do with this: shorten and simplify.
  • The original is too long and florid.
  • Be simple and direct: In honor of your unstinting support for IMTYC "To Wake up and Shine" Trophy wordings are not sentences: they are phrases briefly indicating the cause of the award.
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Hello, Joe-- and welcome to English Forums.

You may not like what I suggest you do with this: shorten and simplify. The original is too long and florid. Be simple and direct:

In honor of your unstinting support for IMTYC "To Wake up and Shine"

Trophy wordings are not sentences: they are phrases briefly indicating the cause of the award.
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Mister Micawber..

Thank you very much !!

I fully agree with you with your last line.....I realized it...

Once again thanks for the support...

Joe
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