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Ryan Heo Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Wordings for a commemorative Plaque ???

Hello,


One of my colleague asks me to check the sentences on his boss's commemorative Plaque below,


" 20th Anniversary of joining in XXX Commemorative Plaque

We are giving you this Commemorative Plaque with respect and gratitude for the dedication and enthusiasm you shown with a constant mind for the development of the company and the team members during the past two decades."


At google search I found out that certain sentences like "We here by present... or presented to" are repeatedly used. Since I am not a native English speaker, I have no idea if those sentences are proper or not on the plaque.

Could you guys help me out?


Thanks.

  

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Yikes! " are not inscribed on the plaque itself. You will see examples like this: Presented to George Henry Smith in recognition of ....

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Yikes! Usually the words "We are giving you this commemorative plaque..." are not inscribed on the plaque itself.
You will see examples like this:

Presented to George Henry Smith in recognition of ....

Here are some guidelines from a company that makes such things:

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I took one of the examples from your suggestion.


Is it OK now?


With our Greatest

Appreciation

We Present

John Smith

With this Award in Recognition for

Your the dedication and enthusiasm

To our Organization for the last 20 years

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