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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Wording of sentence
Is this sentence worded in the correct way, particularly the 'and thus...race' part?
This evidence was a document that proved that the attempt by the Dark Knights to destroy the female draconians, and thus destroy the entire race, was not simply the action of the overzealous officer Zeck.
This evidence was a document that proved that the attempt by the Dark Knights to destroy the female draconians, and thus destroy the entire race, was not simply the action of the overzealous officer Zeck.
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This evidence was a document that proved that the attempt by the Dark Knights to destroy the female draconians, and thus the entire race, was not simply the action of the overzealous officer Zeck.
- This evidence was a document that proved that the attempt by the Dark Knights to destroy the female draconians, and thus the entire race, was not simply the action of the overzealous officer Zeck.
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This evidence was a document that proved that the attempt by the Dark Knights to destroy the female draconians, and thus the entire race, was not simply the action of the overzealous officer Zeck.
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