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John Aki Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Wording help please?

Hi,

Would you please comment on these sentences for me?


Demonstrations succeeded in [ disturbing / disrupting ] the meeting. (Both can be possible however "disrupting" is more extreme, and chaotic.

The building renovation work is creating constant noise, dust and [ disturbance / disruption ] to all the residents.

(Both can be possible again "disruption" is more extreme, and chaotic.

He was charged with causing a [ disturbance / disruption ] after the game. (Both can be possible again "disruption" is more extreme, and chaotic.

The [ disturbance / disruption ] of the local wildlife by tourist. (Only "disturbance" is suitable).


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John Aki

  

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John Aki Demonstrations succeeded in [ disturbing / disrupting ] the meeting. (Both can be possible however "disrupting" is more extreme, and chaotic. You mean "both are possible"; "can" is redundant with "possible".

  • John Aki Demonstrations succeeded in [ disturbing / disrupting ] the meeting.
  • (Both can be possible however "disrupting" is more extreme, and chaotic.
  • You mean "both are possible"; "can" is redundant with "possible".
  • "However" is not a coordinating conjunction, so you have made a run-on sentence.
  • "Both are possible.
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John AkiDemonstrations succeeded in [ disturbing / disrupting ] the meeting. (Both can be possible however "disrupting" is more extreme, and chaotic.

You mean "both are possible"; "can" is redundant with "possible". "However" is not a coordinating conjunction, so you have made a run-on sentence. "Both are possible. However, "disrupting" is more extreme

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disturbance??(??)??:????

There was a minor [ disturbance / disruption ] during the demonstration luckily nobody was injured.(Both can be possible again "disruption" is more extreme, and chaotic. Cheers
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There was a minor [ disturbance / disruption ] during the demonstration luckily nobody was injured.(Both can be possible again "disruption" is more extreme, and chaotic. Cheers
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John Aki

Hi,

Would you please comment on these sentences for me?

It might be a good idea to read the discussion below this quotation box before reading the comments beside each sentence.


Demonstrations succeeded in [ disturbing / disrupting

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