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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Wording correct? Want to write a funny line

This is a line for a hallmark card. We do a go-kart race and I would like to write a funny line to the winner:

Hello Champion!
Some call it reckless driving - we call it 1st prize winner! Congratulations and enjoy your winner package!

Your XXX Team

Is this correct? Thanks for your help!
  

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It looks fine. winner's package {{perhaps better just to say "your prize"}}

  • It looks fine.
  • winner's package {{perhaps better just to say "your prize"}}
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It looks fine.

winner's package {{perhaps better just to say "your prize"}}

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