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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence properly worded? FYI- Palanthas is the city.

Meanwhile, in the present time of 357 AC, a battle raged for control of Palanthas between the city’s defenders and Kitiara’s army.
  

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cboutin3 FYI- Palanthas is the city. Meanwhile, in the present time of 357 AC, a battle raged for control of Palanthas between the city’s defenders and Kitiara’s army.

  • cboutin3 FYI- Palanthas is the city.
  • Meanwhile, in the present time of 357 AC, a battle raged for control of Palanthas between the city’s defenders and Kitiara’s army.
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cboutin3 FYI- Palanthas is the city. Meanwhile, in the present time of 357 AC, a battle raged for control of Palanthas between the city’s defenders and Kitiara’s army.

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