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MIG Posted 12 years ago
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wording.

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Please help me with checking my wording below.

These kinds of themes need to be discussed in more elaborate level before being executed to not provoke consumers anger.
  

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These kinds of themes need to be discussed at a more detailed level before being executed, in order not to provoke consumers' anger. What did you mean by 'elaborate'? We do not 'execute themes'.

— Clive

  • These kinds of themes need to be discussed at a more detailed level before being executed, in order not to provoke consumers' anger.
  • What did you mean by 'elaborate'?
  • We do not 'execute themes'.
  • Say it another way.
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These kinds of themes need to be discussed at a more detailed level before being executed, in order not to provoke consumers' anger.

What did you mean by 'elaborate'?

We do not 'execute themes'. Say it another way.
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MIGPlease help me with ...
Possibly,

We need to discuss these kinds of plans in greater detail before we execute them, or we may provoke consumers' anger.

CJ
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Thank you very much Clive and CalifJim.
CliveWhat did you mean by 'elaborate'?
I meant "detailed".
CliveWe do not 'execute themes'. Say it another way.
If I want to keep theme then Can I say "before we execute the outcome/concluded plan" ?

I have two more questions.
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CliveWhat did you mean by 'elaborate'?
I meant "detailed". Say 'detailed'.
CliveWe do not 'execute themes'. Say it another way.
If I want to keep theme I doubt that 'theme' is the correct word to choose here. What is a simple example of a theme in
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Thank you very very much Clive.Emotion: smile
What is a simple example of a t
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That's not a theme. A theme is a rather literary term.
In business, we more naturally would call it eg an idea.
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