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Julie Rhiles Posted 10 years ago
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Please, correct the sentence if it's wrong.
This article is intended to help pregnant women get a deeper insight on protein consumption during their condition.
Is it okay to use 'their condition' referring to the term 'pregnancy' here?
This article is intended to help pregnant women get a deeper insight on protein consumption during their condition.
Is it okay to use 'their condition' referring to the term 'pregnancy' here?
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"their condition" is not necessarily wrong in itself, but I am not keen on "during their condition". I can't at the moment think of any better word to fit there than "pregnancy" itself. Normally you get an insight "into" something, not "on".
- "their condition" is not necessarily wrong in itself, but I am not keen on "during their condition".
- I can't at the moment think of any better word to fit there than "pregnancy" itself.
- Normally you get an insight "into" something, not "on".
- However, if I was being extremely fussy, I would still not be 100% satisfied with the wording "get a deeper insight into protein consumption".
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"their condition" is not necessarily wrong in itself, but I am not keen on "during their condition". I can't at the moment think of any better word to fit there than "pregnancy" itself.
Normally you get an insight "into" something, not "on". However, if I was being extremely fussy, I would still not be 100% satisfied with the wording "get a deeper insight into protein consumption".
Normally you get an insight "into" something, not "on". However, if I was being extremely fussy, I would still not be 100% satisfied with the wording "get a deeper insight into protein consumption".
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