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Jesse M Paiva Posted 14 years ago
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The songs “Sound of Silence” and “Land of Confusion” both express that you have to act to make a difference, which is still relevant in America today, especially when looking at law changes and disputes between classes.

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The songs “Sound of Silence” and “Land of Confusion” both proclaim the necessity for action in order to make a difference, which is still relevant in America today, particularly when looking at changes in the law and interclass disputes.

  • The songs “Sound of Silence” and “Land of Confusion” both proclaim the necessity for action in order to make a difference, which is still relevant in America today, particularly when looking at changes in the law and interclass disputes.
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The songs “Sound of Silence” and “Land of Confusion” both proclaim the necessity for action in order to make a difference, which is still relevant in America today, particularly when looking at changes in the law and interclass disputes.

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