The man got back up and slowly started toward zayne, who stumbled back against the window.
Is this good? Would you place 'slowly' before or after 'started?
anonymous Is this good? Meh. There are problems.
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anonymousIs this good?
Meh. There are problems.
anonymousWould you place 'slowly' before or after 'started?
He didn't start slowly in any event. He started moving slowly toward our hero. Put "moving" first for the sense of it.
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