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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

word order

Hi,
Is the following sentence correct regarding word order?
"44% of pediatric residents of a large academic centre have reported that they had fallen asleep stopped at a red light, during their training course."

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gillyflower Is the following sentence correct It's very hard to decipher. Try re-writing it.

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gillyflowerIs the following sentence correct
It's very hard to decipher. Try re-writing it.
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Thanks for your reply.
AlpheccaStarsIt's very hard to decipher. Try re-writing it.
I'm trying to write:
"44% of pediatric residents [who are working] in a large academic centre have reported that they had fallen asleep [when they had] stopped at a red light, [and this have happened] during their training course."

I don't know how I can rewrite the s
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Forty-four percent of pediatric residents working in a large academic centre have reported that, at at least one time during their training course, they had fallen asleep while stopped at a red light.
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