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Kook j Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Word order

Hi.
Could you please check the word order of the following sentence?
I found it in a movie as a part of dialogue but I'm not sure it can be used in writing as well.

What you did today, we will not forget.

Thank you very much in advance.
  

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I suppose you could. " "We" is understood.

  • I suppose you could.
  • " "We" is understood.
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I suppose you could. But it would, in my opinion, be better to write "What you did today will not be forgotten."
"We" is understood.
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Hi.
Thank you John. I could only think "We will not forget what you did today." but your passive one also sounds very fine. I appreciate your example.
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"We will not forget what you did today" is also good.
I chose the passive as a means of expressing what I felt was a certain solemnity in your sentence.
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Thank you very much, again.

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