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Olgaa Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Word order

Can I use the following order of bold words in long sentences where all subordinate clauses go after each other and it's imposiible to replace them not to distort the meaning?

e.g. During the analysis there will be defined the necessity in implementation of specified ....

or: During the analysis there will be performed the analysis of existing indicators ... etc.
  

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I really have trouble understanding these two sentences..... g. During the analysis there will be defined the necessity in implementation of specified ..

  • I really have trouble understanding these two sentences.....
  • g.
  • During the analysis there will be defined the necessity in implementation of specified ..
  • or: During the analysis there will be performed the analysis of existing indicators ...
  • etc.
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I really have trouble understanding these two sentences.....

e.g. During the analysis there will be defined the necessity in implementation of specified ..

or: During the analysis there will be performed the analysis of existing indicators ... etc.
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Let's take the first sentence Emotion: smile

During the analysis there will be defined the necessity of implementation of specified tax d
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Why do you use "there"?

Just this will do

During the analysis, the necessity in implementing something will be determined

During the analysis, the existing indicators will be analyzed



I can't vouch for their correctness, but at least they don't baffle the reader all too much.
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Thanks. Hope this version of the sentence will be much clearer in spite of the fact it's too long:

During the analysis, the existing indicators of tax reporting forms provided by the STA regarding the necessity of including each indicator into tax declaration forms or one or more declaration attachments will be analyzed.
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Hi Olgaa,

Hope this version of the sentence will be much clearer in spite of the fact it's too long:



During the analysis, the existing indicators of tax reporting forms provided by the STA regarding the necessity of including each indicator into tax declaration forms or one or more declaration attachments will be analyzed



Sorry, but this is still no

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