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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which word option is a better choice for this sentence?
1. Before the surprised Ergothians could pursue, holes opened up in the ground amidst the ranks of Ackal V’s hordes (that) were revealed to be entrances to several large tunnels.
2. Before the surprised Ergothians could pursue, holes opened up in the ground amidst the ranks of Ackal V’s hordes (and) were revealed to be entrances to several large tunnels.
1. Before the surprised Ergothians could pursue, holes opened up in the ground amidst the ranks of Ackal V’s hordes (that) were revealed to be entrances to several large tunnels.
2. Before the surprised Ergothians could pursue, holes opened up in the ground amidst the ranks of Ackal V’s hordes (and) were revealed to be entrances to several large tunnels.
Top answer
Too much sentence. I'd use a semi-colon after hordes and use 'they were revealed' or even 'the holes were revealed'.
- Too much sentence.
- I'd use a semi-colon after hordes and use 'they were revealed' or even 'the holes were revealed'.
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Too much sentence. I'd use a semi-colon after hordes and use 'they were revealed' or even 'the holes were revealed'.
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