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The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2], but little research has been done on the effect of people reading emergency exit signs, in the intervening years.
The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2], but little research has been done on the effect of people reading emergency exit signs, in the intervening years.
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Hi, The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2], but little research has been done on the effect of people reading emergency exit signs , in the intervening years. Perhaps: The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2]. However, since that time, little research has been done on its effect on people who read emergency exit signs.
- Hi, The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2], but little research has been done on the effect of people reading emergency exit signs , in the intervening years.
- Perhaps: The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2].
- However, since that time, little research has been done on its effect on people who read emergency exit signs.
- Or perhaps .
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Hi,
The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2], but little research has been done on the effect of people reading emergency exit signs, in the intervening years.
Perhaps:
The human-shape sign was designed by Japanese designer Yukio Ota in 1980 and listed in ISO 7001 Public Information Symbols in 1983 [2], but little research has been done on the effect of people reading emergency exit signs, in the intervening years.
Perhaps:
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Hi Clive,
I appreciate your suggestions. What do u think of this...
However, since that time, little research has been done on its effect on people's interpretation of emergency exit signs.
I appreciate your suggestions. What do u think of this...
However, since that time, little research has been done on its effect on people's interpretation of emergency exit signs.
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