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Lisa Brinkmann Posted 3 years ago
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Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:
I have copied John Doe, Vendor Compliance Supervisor, on this email to reach out to you if anything else is needed.
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Lisa Brinkmann Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice: Clarity is the problem. "
- Lisa Brinkmann Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice: Clarity is the problem.
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Lisa BrinkmannIs this sentence clear or is there a better choice:
Clarity is the problem. I might change it to
"I have copied John Doe, Vendor Compliance Supervisor, on this email so that he can reach out to you if anything else is needed."
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It is confusing. As the recipient, will I expect a call from John Doe? When? Why?
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