Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:
A gift card in the amount of $300.00 was given to the customer as agreed upon in lieu of making vanity top and ceiling flaw corrections.
or
A gift card in the amount of $300.00 was given to the customer as agreed upon in lieu of correcting vanity top and ceiling flaws.
Lisa Brinkmann Which sentence is clearer and a better choice: It's hard to decide because they are very close. If I had to choose, I think I'd choose the first one. CJ
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Lisa BrinkmannWhich sentence is clearer and a better choice:
It's hard to decide because they are very close. If I had to choose, I think I'd choose the first one.
CJ