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Which sentence is clearer or is there a better choice:
We will then coordinate the items to be addressed.
or
We will coordinate with you to address the items.
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Lisa Brinkmann Which sentence is clearer or is there a better choice: The first one uses "coordinate" wrong, as far as I can tell. The second is so vague I almost disappeared while reading it. I don't know what you are trying to say.
- Lisa Brinkmann Which sentence is clearer or is there a better choice: The first one uses "coordinate" wrong, as far as I can tell.
- The second is so vague I almost disappeared while reading it.
- I don't know what you are trying to say.
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Lisa BrinkmannWhich sentence is clearer or is there a better choice:
The first one uses "coordinate" wrong, as far as I can tell. The second is so vague I almost disappeared while reading it. I don't know what you are trying to say.
0Lisa BrinkmannWhich sentence is clearer
the second one
Lisa BrinkmannWe will coordinate with you to address the items.
Also, perhaps in plainer English with less business jargon, which you may actually want:
We will work with you to take care of these matters.
CJ
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