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Lisa Brinkmann Posted 4 years ago
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Is this sentence clear or is there a better way to condense it?

We have been unable to reach you by phone to schedule a meeting with the project manager regarding the repairs at your residence.

  

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Lisa Brinkmann Is this sentence clear I can't call it crystal. Although it is not hard to figure out who is supposed to meet with who, the sentence doesn't say. "

  • Lisa Brinkmann Is this sentence clear I can't call it crystal.
  • Although it is not hard to figure out who is supposed to meet with who, the sentence doesn't say.
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Lisa BrinkmannIs this sentence clear

I can't call it crystal. Although it is not hard to figure out who is supposed to meet with who, the sentence doesn't say. Maybe "We have been unable to reach you by phone to schedule your meeting with our project manager regarding the repairs at your residence."

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