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Lisa Brinkmann Posted 7 years ago
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The date change from 10/4/2019 to 12/20/2019 is due to the multiple delays with the customer making selections. The date is subject to change again if the remaining selections aren't received as soon as possible.

  

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The rescheduling from 10/4/2019 to 12/20/2019 occurred because the customer had not made the required selections in a timely manner. It will be further delayed if the remaining selections aren't received by the end of the week.

  • The rescheduling from 10/4/2019 to 12/20/2019 occurred because the customer had not made the required selections in a timely manner.
  • It will be further delayed if the remaining selections aren't received by the end of the week.
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The rescheduling from 10/4/2019 to 12/20/2019 occurred because the customer had not made the required selections in a timely manner. It will be further delayed if the remaining selections aren't received by the end of the week.

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