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Lisa Brinkmann Posted 7 years ago
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Is there a better way to make this statement:
The painting of the entry doors in units 2099 A & C will be completed along with the interior painting.
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Here's an alternative. The painting of entry doors and interiors for Units 2099 A & C will be completed (soon/eventually/by X date). Notice that the original version used "painting" twice, whereas it is only used once in the alternative version.
- Here's an alternative.
- The painting of entry doors and interiors for Units 2099 A & C will be completed (soon/eventually/by X date).
- Notice that the original version used "painting" twice, whereas it is only used once in the alternative version.
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Here's an alternative.
The painting of entry doors and interiors for Units 2099 A & C will be completed (soon/eventually/by X date).
Notice that the original version used "painting" twice, whereas it is only used once in the alternative version.
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