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Lisa Brinkmann Posted 7 years ago
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Is this sentence clear:
We discussed that we are in the process of ordering the carpet and will provide a delivery date and that we will schedule for their rug to be put back in the dining room.
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" doesn't work. The verb 'discuss' doesn't work like that. Try another verb like 'explain'.
- " doesn't work.
- The verb 'discuss' doesn't work like that.
- Try another verb like 'explain'.
- You might be able to shorten your sentence a little, too.
- We explained that we are ordering the carpet and that we will provide a delivery date and schedule installation in the dining room.
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"We discussed that ..." doesn't work. The verb 'discuss' doesn't work like that. Try another verb like 'explain'. You might be able to shorten your sentence a little, too.
We explained that we are ordering the carpet and that we will provide a delivery date and schedule installation in the dining room.
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