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Lisa Brinkmann Posted 7 years ago
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Is this sentence clear and is punctuation needed:

Jim was advised by Mike with Premier that his crew will begin the interior repairs tomorrow and customer is aware.

  

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If you mean that Mike works for a company called Premier, it's clearer to say "Mike at Premier" rather than "Mike with Premier". In full, say "the customer is aware". "customer is aware" is abbreviated or note-form English, which may nevertheless be OK in the context.

  • If you mean that Mike works for a company called Premier, it's clearer to say "Mike at Premier" rather than "Mike with Premier".
  • In full, say "the customer is aware".
  • "customer is aware" is abbreviated or note-form English, which may nevertheless be OK in the context.
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If you mean that Mike works for a company called Premier, it's clearer to say "Mike at Premier" rather than "Mike with Premier".

In full, say "the customer is aware". "customer is aware" is abbreviated or note-form English, which may nevertheless be OK in the context.

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