Word Choice
Which is clearer and a better choice:
The target completion date has been updated because the range selected by the customer is expected to arrive in three weeks.
or
The target completion date has been updated because the range selected by the customer isn't expected to arrive for three weeks.
Top answer
These are not clear at all. "
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These are not clear at all. This sentence should apparently be something like:
"The target completion date will be updated when the acceptable time of completion range, which is to be specified by the customer, arrives in three weeks."
0Lisa BrinkmannWhich is clearer and a better choice
The second one is better by far.
CJ
0The word "range" has almost a hundred different meanings, and the very last one that would come to mind is "stove." Thus, even if the given sentence appears in the context of appliances, it is totally confusing. I would reword it, for example, as:
"The completion date has been pushed forward to July 9, because the type of stove ordered by the customer is not scheduled to ar
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