Word Choice
Which sentence is a better choice:
The customers made a few changes to the cabinet design, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them.
or
The customers made a few cabinet design changes, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them.
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Lisa Brinkmann Which sentence is a better choice: The customers made a few changes to the cabinet design, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them. or The customers made a few cabinet design changes, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them. Just to make sure I got the context: Do you mean the customer had made some changes to the design but the cabinet fabrication is nearing completion?
- Lisa Brinkmann Which sentence is a better choice: The customers made a few changes to the cabinet design, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them.
- or The customers made a few cabinet design changes, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them.
- Just to make sure I got the context: Do you mean the customer had made some changes to the design but the cabinet fabrication is nearing completion?
- Both actually fine, but # 1 (changes to the cabinet design) flows better.
- Also for the conjunction (and), it will demonstrate the conflict more effectively if replaced with "but".
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Lisa BrinkmannWhich sentence is a better choice:
The customers made a few changes to the cabinet design, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them.
or
The customers made a few cabinet design changes, and our cabinet supplier is nearing completion on finalizing them.
Just to make sure I got the context: Do you
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