Are these sentences clear or do they include unnecessary words:
Please endorse the check and complete and sign the authorization form and then return them to me in the enclosed prepaid envelope. I will then send them to First Bank Mortgage with any required documents and keep you informed about them processing.
The sentence contains only a few unnecessary words: Please endorse the check, complete and sign the authorization form and return them to me in the enclosed prepaid envelope. I will send them to First Bank Mortgage with any required documents and keep you informed of their processing.
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The sentence contains only a few unnecessary words:
Please endorse the check, complete and sign the authorization form and return them to me in the enclosed prepaid envelope. I will send them to First Bank Mortgage with any required documents and keep you informed of their processing.