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Lisa Brinkmann Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Word Choice

Which is clearer and a better choice (or neither):

We have been unable to contact you by phone to schedule a walk-through with the project superintendent to discuss the repairs at your property.

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We have been unable to contact you by phone to schedule a walk-through between you and the project superintendent to discuss the repairs at your property.

  

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My two cents... We have been unable to contact you by phone to schedule a walk-through with the project superintendent to view the repairs you've suggested ( or SAID ) should be made to the property.

— Ann321

  • My two cents...
  • We have been unable to contact you by phone to schedule a walk-through with the project superintendent to view the repairs you've suggested ( or SAID ) should be made to the property.
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My two cents...


We have been unable to contact you by phone to schedule a walk-through with the project superintendent to view the repairs you've suggested (or SAID) should be made to the property.

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It certainly can be. It's a matter of preference.

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