Should this sentence include a comma and/or is there a better way to rephrase the sentence:
The windows were installed including the garden window.
It needs the comma, and it is OK then. I can't know exactly what the situation is with these windows, so I hesitate to make any suggestions for revision.
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It needs the comma, and it is OK then. I can't know exactly what the situation is with these windows, so I hesitate to make any suggestions for revision.
Yes, it must have punctuation; I think a comma would be okay.
You could change to:
The windows, including the one that looks out on the garden*, were installed.
*I'm assuming that's what you meant by 'garden window'.