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Lime car 389 Posted 8 years ago
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Word Choice
Is "that" needed in each segment of the sentence?
She advised that she is very happy with the repairs, that all work was completed, that the crew was friendly, and that Hunter and Matt kept the ball rolling.
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In my opinion, only the first that is needed.
- In my opinion, only the first that is needed.
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'She advised' is unnatural in that sentence, which is in itself too long. You have tried to get too many different ideas into one sentence:
She was happy with the repairs.
She was happy that all the work had been completed.
She was happy that the crew had been friendly.
She was happy that Hunter and Matt had kept the ball rolling. - Whatever
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