Word Choice
Which sentence is clearer:
This change is due to the delays in correcting issues requested by the county and getting the inspections approved.
or
This change is due to the delays we had in correcting issues requested by the county and getting the inspections approved.
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lime car 389 Which sentence is clearer I'd say they are equally clear. I'd probably use the second one, but there's nothing wrong with the first. CJ
- lime car 389 Which sentence is clearer I'd say they are equally clear.
- I'd probably use the second one, but there's nothing wrong with the first.
- CJ
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lime car 389Which sentence is clearer
I'd say they are equally clear. I'd probably use the second one, but there's nothing wrong with the first.
CJ
0Both sentences are correct, but you might want to use the first one without "we" because the first one sounds more professional. If you are a little casual with the recipient of the email, you could use the second one, though both are easy to understand and sound fine.
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