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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Word choice

Which word option is a better choice to make it clear that it refers to Silvanoshei, the king?
However, Silvanoshei did not want to return to Silvanesti without Mina, so instead he gave Gerard the duty of finding Samar and telling him that (he/the elven king) was dead
  

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I think that he would be fine, but you should use the elven king to modify Silvanoshei when he is first mentioned.

  • I think that he would be fine, but you should use the elven king to modify Silvanoshei when he is first mentioned.
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I think that he would be fine, but you should use the elven king to modify Silvanoshei when he is first mentioned.

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