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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Word choice
Which word/phrase is a better choice to start the second sentence?
Tanis was then branded an outlaw by the elves and told never to return to Qualinesti. Immediately afterward/Immediately thereafter, Tanis traveled to Silvanesti and managed to rescue Porthios from incarceration by dishonorable elven nobles.
Tanis was then branded an outlaw by the elves and told never to return to Qualinesti. Immediately afterward/Immediately thereafter, Tanis traveled to Silvanesti and managed to rescue Porthios from incarceration by dishonorable elven nobles.
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I would use 'afterward'.
- I would use 'afterward'.
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