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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Should I use 'that' or 'this'?
However, this advantage shifted when Sammaster started to provide tactical direction to his otherworldly servants and unleashed his own magic against the metallics. During that/this part of the battle, Dorn’s golem parts were severely damaged by the breath weapon of a rust dragon.
  

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cboutin3 Should I use 'that' or 'this'? I would say either fits well, though they pass on slightly different impressions. I would guess that using this refers to the part of the battle you are talking about right now, whilst using that might be referring to the part of the battle that happened in the past...

  • cboutin3 Should I use 'that' or 'this'?
  • I would say either fits well, though they pass on slightly different impressions.
  • I would guess that using this refers to the part of the battle you are talking about right now, whilst using that might be referring to the part of the battle that happened in the past...
  • This would give an idea of the battle being somehow "closer", and that would give an idea of it being "further" away.
  • I would guess that, if you're really concerned about that wording, think about how "close" to the battle you want the reader to feel.
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cboutin3Should I use 'that' or 'this'?
I would say either fits well, though they pass on slightly different impressions. I would guess that using this refers to the part of the battle you are talking about right now, whilst using that might be referring to the part of the battle that happened in the past... This would give an idea of the b

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