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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Woops, need help with my letter! :-)

Can some body can have a look my thank you letter for an interview?

Dear xx,
Thank you for taking the time to interview me about the Customer Services Officer position yesterday; it was great meeting with you and Steve.
I really enjoyed the interview, and it is a good chance for me to know xx’s expectations for customer service through those interview questions. Although some of the questions I did not answer clearly due to my panicky, such as decision-making; there is my point of view after thinking about it thoroughly:
Decision Making:
•Compliance with company policies
•Acting in the best interest of the company
•Considering exciting risk
•Integrity, without biased & personal interest
•Respecting & looking after customer
I believe that my work experience, qualification, and the position requirements are a good match. I feel that this position will enable me to demonstrate my abilities and skills, and make a contribution in an area I am passionate about and see my future career in.

My reference would happy to tell you more about my experience, skills, and personality as a worker, and a student.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely

xx
  

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Here are some suggestions: Dear xx, Thank you for taking the time yesterday to interview me for about the Customer Services Officer position yesterday ; it was great meeting with you and Steve. I really enjoyed the interview, and The interview questions gave me quite some insight into it is was a good opportunity chance for me to learn know xx’s expectations for customer service through those interview question s. Although S ome of the questions I did not answer adequately clearly due to my nervousness (or interview jitters).

  • Here are some suggestions: Dear xx, Thank you for taking the time yesterday to interview me for about the Customer Services Officer position yesterday ; it was great meeting with you and Steve.
  • I really enjoyed the interview, and The interview questions gave me quite some insight into it is was a good opportunity chance for me to learn know xx’s expectations for customer service through those interview question s.
  • Although S ome of the questions I did not answer adequately clearly due to my nervousness (or interview jitters).
  • ) •Respecting & looking after customer I believe that the demands of the position are a good match with my work experience and qualification s , and the position requirements are a good match .
  • I feel that this position will enable me to both exercise and further develop demonstrate my abilities and skills.
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Here are some suggestions:

Dear xx,
Thank you for taking the time yesterday to interview me for about the Customer Services Officer position yesterday; it was great meeting with you and Steve.
I really enjoyed the interview, and The interview questions gave me quite some insight into it is was a good opportunit

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