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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Wondering if this is GCSE quality.
Today was my tenth birthday, it was not similar to any other birthday and the reason is not because i turn a decade today.The reason was because my dad was finally coming back from the war
and he was going to live with us.This might seem normal for any other child who has a normal family life , but, for me it was something
to celeberate about, cause i was finally going to have some one that i could play footy with, no offense to mum but competing with someone
who is not capable of kicking straight would be unchallenging.
Ding,ding,
and he was going to live with us.This might seem normal for any other child who has a normal family life , but, for me it was something
to celeberate about, cause i was finally going to have some one that i could play footy with, no offense to mum but competing with someone
who is not capable of kicking straight would be unchallenging.
Ding,ding,
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No, but I guess for a 10-year-old, it's OK. I have underlined some problem areas: Today was my tenth birthd ay, it was not similar to any other birthday and the reason is not because i turn a decade today. This might seem normal for any other child who has a normal family life , but, f or me it was something to celeberate about , cause i was finally going to have some one that i could play footy with , no offense to mum but competing with someone who is not capable of kicking straight would be unchallenging .
- No, but I guess for a 10-year-old, it's OK.
- I have underlined some problem areas: Today was my tenth birthd ay, it was not similar to any other birthday and the reason is not because i turn a decade today.
- This might seem normal for any other child who has a normal family life , but, f or me it was something to celeberate about , cause i was finally going to have some one that i could play footy with , no offense to mum but competing with someone who is not capable of kicking straight would be unchallenging .
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No, but I guess for a 10-year-old, it's OK. I have underlined some problem areas:
Today was my tenth birthday, it was not similar to any other birthday and the reason is not because i turn a decade today. The reason was because my dad was finally coming back from the war
and he was going to live with us.This might seem normal f
Today was my tenth birthday, it was not similar to any other birthday and the reason is not because i turn a decade today. The reason was because my dad was finally coming back from the war
and he was going to live with us.This might seem normal f
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