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Vicky vy 1307 Posted 6 years ago
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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

In the past, women were responsible for looking after children and men went out to work. However, life has changed, including the role between males and females, beside bringing up their children, women are successful in making a living. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that women should focus more on raising children and less on their working life although they are good at child-rearing.

First, male chauvism is no longer to be existed now, both genders can be treated equally. They are likely to be successful in bringing up a child base on their knowledge and love. Nowadays, in many familes, mothers teach their children how to cook, do housework while fathers develop their offsprings by teach them to study and play sport. So, saying that women should better at childcare can make their children think that mothers are carers only, especially girls will not focus on their study by keeping that thinking.


Second, not only being good at childcare but women in the present can also take charge of their jobs and even better than man. They can balance their time for work and family, at a result, they are very successful in their careers in spite of being occupied with their children. Therefore, man had better manage time in earning a living and taking care of their children.


In conclusion, instead of staying at home woman should take part in their jobs and men had better spending time on their families and children.

  
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