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Witnesses of the Inquiry

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Koh Kia Fong


Koh was stationed at the counter. He was unsure of how the fight started, only knew two of them were on the ground. It is very common quarrel inside the office. Roger and Ahmad have quarreled with Koh before as well. He just watched the fight and watched them kicked each other. Hassan persuaded them to stop the fight.

Ranjith

Around 2255, Ranjith received a call from Hassan. Ranjith went to the office but did not see anything. Only two of them inside, Roger and Hassan were talking. Ranjith heard that they punched each other. Roger informed Ranjith that he has settled with his duty officer. Hassan called Ahmad and passed Ranjith the phone. Ahmad sounds happy and nothing happens. Ranjith asked him whether did he got any injury. He said no. Hassan informed Ranjith he will settle internally on Monday morning.

S Raman

He was sitting at Nair’s table. Around 2250, Roger came to S Raman asked what happened to “Toll Firefly” . Ahmad said it is cancelled. S Raman said it is not cancelled, it’s coming at 0530. Roger looked at Ahmad and said how come you said it is cancelled when S Raman said its coming. Ahmad replied, earlier vessel cancelled. Roger got angry said why u told me earlier vessel when I wanted to know about my shift. Suddenly, they fought with each other. He finishes his shift; he will always put his songkou. Songku actually fell as a result of the Scuffle between the two of them. It may not be purposely does it. Hassan called the police after that. After which, Roger went out of the office to challenge Ahmad for a fight again. Hassan and a few others advised Ahmad to ignore his challenge.
  
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