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Raliev Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

With the challenges on how ..., how..., how ...

Hello,

I can't find the answer on internet. Is it grammatically correct to write the following sentence:

Many years ago I was heading the project of CMS development project and dealing with the challenges on how to make the CMS functional and convenient, how to find a right balance between feature richness and simplicity, how to find a solution that would be extremely flexible and configurable to an organization’s needs.

The question is about the parts of the sentence separated by a comma:

  • about how to make... , how to achieve and how to something else
  • the author describes how beautiful the nature is, how good people were, how large our world is ..
  • (and the similar sentences with "which", "that", "what", "why" etc.)

  

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raliev Many years ago I was heading the project of CMS development project and dealing with the challenges on how to make the CMS functional and convenient, how to find a right balance between feature richness and simplicity, and how to find a solution that would be extremely flexible and configurable to an organization’s needs. As shown. A list of large clauses like these is punctuated the same as a list of short words.

— CalifJim

  • raliev Many years ago I was heading the project of CMS development project and dealing with the challenges on how to make the CMS functional and convenient, how to find a right balance between feature richness and simplicity, and how to find a solution that would be extremely flexible and configurable to an organization’s needs.
  • As shown.
  • A list of large clauses like these is punctuated the same as a list of short words.
  • Her favorite pets are dogs , cats , and canaries.
  • raliev similar sentences with "which", "that", "what", "why" etc.
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ralievMany years ago I was heading the project of CMS development project and dealing with the challenges on how to make the CMS functional and convenient, how to find a right balance between feature richness and simplicity, and how to find a solution that would be extremely flexible and configurable to an organization
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Yes, you can use commas to separate a series of parallel statements. Sometimes writers use semicolons for a stronger separation, especially when the sections are long or have internal commas.

However, I would add the "and" to this series. As follows:

Many years ago I was heading the project of CMS development project and dealing with the challenges on how to make the

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