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Avid learner Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

With or without there?

Hi,

Is the following sentence correct? The word "there" sounds a little bit off for me.

"My heart turned cold on the day hers turned cold, there on the frozen river of memories."

Thanks, AL
  

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This is theoretically grammatical. This might be okay used in poetry, but it could not be used in real world speech or writing.

  • This is theoretically grammatical.
  • This might be okay used in poetry, but it could not be used in real world speech or writing.
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This is theoretically grammatical. This might be okay used in poetry, but it could not be used in real world speech or writing.

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