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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

With my own knowledge

Is the following sentence acceptable?

Teaching people with my own knowledge is great.
  

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The object and the prepositional phrase are redundant, and the word 'great' is without content. 'Teaching is great' tells us nothing. Try to think and write concisely and meaningfully: Sharing my knowledge is satisfying.

  • The object and the prepositional phrase are redundant, and the word 'great' is without content.
  • 'Teaching is great' tells us nothing.
  • Try to think and write concisely and meaningfully: Sharing my knowledge is satisfying.
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The object and the prepositional phrase are redundant, and the word 'great' is without content. 'Teaching is great' tells us nothing. Try to think and write concisely and meaningfully: Sharing my knowledge is satisfying.

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