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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
With a family whose mom and dad are busy with their business and have daughters who provided all of luxury but they do not know that much that it makes it poorly.
with a family whose mom and dad are busy with their business and have daughters who provided all of luxury but they do not know that much that it makes it poorly.
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Hi, This sentence is too long and unstructured, so it has a lot of errors. For example, what is the subject? Would you like to try to write it again in the form of separate and shorter sentences?
- Hi, This sentence is too long and unstructured, so it has a lot of errors.
- For example, what is the subject?
- Would you like to try to write it again in the form of separate and shorter sentences?
- Clive
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Hi,
This sentence is too long and unstructured, so it has a lot of errors.
For example, what is the subject?
Would you like to try to write it again in the form of separate and shorter sentences?
This sentence is too long and unstructured, so it has a lot of errors.
For example, what is the subject?
Would you like to try to write it again in the form of separate and shorter sentences?
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