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Hungry Posted 19 years ago
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Wishes

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00Could you please tell me if there are any mistakes in the text below, or if you have a more natural way of saying the same thing?02br
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01i00May the blessings of God light up this new lunar year of your life, plus the years that follow thereafter with happiness, prosperity and lots of whoops of laughter. And may you get a bit bigger.02i00 01font00(bigger = taller)02font0-
  

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0Is this a traditional blessing? :02br 02br 00May the blessings of *** light up your coming year and the years that follow with happiness, prosperity, and lots of whoops of laughter. And may He add inches to your height.

  • 0Is this a traditional blessing?
  • :02br 02br 00May the blessings of *** light up your coming year and the years that follow with happiness, prosperity, and lots of whoops of laughter.
  • And may He add inches to your height.
  • 02br 02br 00I tried to eliminate redundant phrases.
  • I prefer to use *** as the actor in the second wish, since you used Him in the first wish.
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0Is this a traditional blessing? 02br
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00I'll give it a try, but...:02br
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00May the blessings of *** light up your coming year and the years that follow with happiness, prosperity, and lots of whoops of laughter. And may He add inches to your height. 02br
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00I tried to eliminate redundant phrases. I prefer to use *** as

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