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Diotima Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
wise advice - candidate's letter
Could you please help me to improve this letter? I am writing to enquiry about possible opportunities at a language school in my town that has a terrific reputation and I would like to submit to their attention my resume politely.
Here is it:
I am writing with regard to the possibility of teaching at your school as a TEFL teacher.
I have a MA's degree in xxx (class:merit) awarded by XXX and I have earned a CELTA certificate to teach English as a second language. I have taught English for more than two years and I have been offered a place at a Cambridge Young Learners extension course this summer as I would like to expand my knowledge and develop my career towards fun educational programmes for children.
I would like to submit my resume for your consideration as a TEFL teacher for young learners at your school and my candidacy as a possible interviewee.
I strongly believe in teaching as a mission and I would like to be part of a renowned institution that has always set high standard for English teaching.
Here is it:
I am writing with regard to the possibility of teaching at your school as a TEFL teacher.
I have a MA's degree in xxx (class:merit) awarded by XXX and I have earned a CELTA certificate to teach English as a second language. I have taught English for more than two years and I have been offered a place at a Cambridge Young Learners extension course this summer as I would like to expand my knowledge and develop my career towards fun educational programmes for children.
I would like to submit my resume for your consideration as a TEFL teacher for young learners at your school and my candidacy as a possible interviewee.
I strongly believe in teaching as a mission and I would like to be part of a renowned institution that has always set high standard for English teaching.
Top answer
I am writing to enquiry enquire about possible opportunities at a language school in my town that has a terrific reputation and I would like to submit to their attention my resume politely a polite resume for their attention. Here is it: it is: I am writing with regard to the possibility of teaching at your school as a TEFL teacher. I have a MA's an MA degree in *** (class:merit) awarded by XX X and I have earned a CELTA certificate to teach English as a second language.
- I am writing to enquiry enquire about possible opportunities at a language school in my town that has a terrific reputation and I would like to submit to their attention my resume politely a polite resume for their attention.
- Here is it: it is: I am writing with regard to the possibility of teaching at your school as a TEFL teacher.
- I have a MA's an MA degree in *** (class:merit) awarded by XX X and I have earned a CELTA certificate to teach English as a second language.
- I have taught been teaching English now for more than two year s.
- I have been offered a place at in a Cambridge Young Learners extension course this summer, as I would like to expand my knowledge and develop my knowledge and my career towards educational programmes that are also fun for children.
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I am writing to enquiry enquire about possible opportunities at a language school in my town that has a terrific reputation and I would like to submit to their attention my resume politely a polite resume for their attention.
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Many thanks. I have never written an unsolicited cover letter. Somehow it intimidates me. I wanted to do my best and I am really grateful for your help. Do you think the style and the content are appropriate or is there anything I can add/omit/amend?
Thanks a lot.
Thanks a lot.
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No - it is fine. All it needed was the little bit of rephrasing that I did. 
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