Are these grammatically correct?
1. A military officer returns home to overcome his demons by getting into an MMA match with the children of the man who had tormented his family for years.
2. Hassan leaves his family at a young age to overcome his demons by joining the military and to get away from the injustice towards his family and community committed by Raja. He returns to help out his family and settle a debt owed by his sister Zain by engaging in an MMA match. Hassan and Zain engage in a rematch with Vee and Rayya, the children of Raja.
Can someone please help me to check the grammar? Thanks in advance.
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I hope I got it in a right way:
A military officer returns home to overcome his demons by taking part in an MMA match with the children of the man who had tormented his family for years.