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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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will you rate this on a scale of 1-4???

0One great experience that I have had this year is cheerleading. I had fun this year because of my fellow cheerleaders, and performing dances and cheers. It was a lot of fun to learn dances and hang out with the other cheerleaders. We are like one big family!02br
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00 First, It was a great experience for me because I had fun with my fellow cheerleaders! They are so nice and funny! If you don't understand something, they help you fix it and show you ways to help do things better! I've had a blast this year at cheer camp, and football games! The cheerleaders are like family to me! 02br
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00 Also, Cheerleading this year was a great experience for me because performing dances and cheers has helped me work harder and boosted my self-motivation! I feal great after working hard to learn a dance and going out and perfoming it to perfection! Hard work does pay off! I am also very greatful towards my coach! She is very creative and made up half our dances! 02br
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00 In conclusion, Cheerleading was a great experience for me this year! I couldn't of done it without with the support of the other cheerleaders, my coach, friends, and family! I had so much fun this year, I hope I make the squad again next year!0-
  

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0 I will give it a 3. It is quite good overall. 0-

  • 0 I will give it a 3.
  • It is quite good overall.
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0 I will give it a 3. It is quite good overall. 02br
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00I'd rate it as a 2. It's okay. You could imporve it with getting rid of the repetitions plus the minor mistakes. 02br
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00Cheerleading this year was a great experience for me. Especially, the performing of dances and cheers helped me. I have been able to work harder and I could boost my se

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