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Mitsuo23 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Will you proofread this? 28 words.

Hi all,

Will you proofread the writing below, especially the articles and plurals part? If you need the exact context to access them, here it is: www.office231.com

"As we frequently find the requests of localization in reviews such as App Store, we recommend you implement it and expand a large new market here in Japan."
Any revisions would be welcomed.

Thanks for your help in advance.
M
  

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As we frequently find requests for localization in reviews such as those in the App Store, we recommend that you [etc] The rest is ok Sorry, didn't have time to read the site, but I corrected the grammar - I hope it's what you meant!

  • As we frequently find requests for localization in reviews such as those in the App Store, we recommend that you [etc] The rest is ok Sorry, didn't have time to read the site, but I corrected the grammar - I hope it's what you meant!
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As we frequently find requests for localization in reviews such as those in the App Store, we recommend that you [etc]
The rest is ok
Sorry, didn't have time to read the site, but I corrected the grammar - I hope it's what you meant!
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Thanks deborah, it was a big help.

M

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