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Jenkins kept firing his automatic rifle despite being close to pass out from the pain. Still holding the katana impaling him, the Japanese soldier turned (with) him, directing the salvo at Roberts who, trying to escape the rain of bullets, ran across the temple and dove through a window.
anonymous Jenkins kept firing his automatic rifle We should already know what kind of weapon he has. Jenkins kept firing. anonymous despite being close to pass out from the pain passing out anonymous Still holding the katana impaling him Who?
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anonymousJenkins kept firing his automatic rifle
We should already know what kind of weapon he has. Jenkins kept firing.
anonymousdespite being close to pass out from the pain
passing out
anonymousStill holding the katana impaling him
Who?
anonymous