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Jenkins kept firing his automatic rifle despite being close to pass out from the pain. Still holding the katana impaling him, the Japanese soldier turned (with) him, directing the salvo at Roberts who, trying to escape the rain of bullets, ran across the temple and dove through a window.

  

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anonymous Jenkins kept firing his automatic rifle We should already know what kind of weapon he has. Jenkins kept firing. anonymous despite being close to pass out from the pain passing out anonymous Still holding the katana impaling him Who?

  • anonymous Jenkins kept firing his automatic rifle We should already know what kind of weapon he has.
  • Jenkins kept firing.
  • anonymous despite being close to pass out from the pain passing out anonymous Still holding the katana impaling him Who?
  • anonymous the Japanese soldier turned (with) him Who, and how is the soldier turning him?
  • To turn with him is to turn at the same time as him.
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anonymousJenkins kept firing his automatic rifle

We should already know what kind of weapon he has. Jenkins kept firing.

anonymousdespite being close to pass out from the pain

passing out

anonymousStill holding the katana impaling him

Who?

anonymous

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