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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Will you please check this sentence

Hello, I have this sentence that I would like you to check for me

She reaches for her purse, and while doing so, she notices a fifty-dollar bill under the table.

Are the commas and structure perfect?

Thank you in advance.

  

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They look good to me, though there are other equally good ways to express it, so I wouldn't say it was perfect .

  • They look good to me, though there are other equally good ways to express it, so I wouldn't say it was perfect .
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They look good to me, though there are other equally good ways to express it, so I wouldn't say it was perfect.

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