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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Will you correct my English? (Aug.25)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Will you ( Are you going to ) join Ken's going-away party this Saturday?
F: Why ( all ) the fuss? He is going to be away just a month, isn't he?
M: Right. But I'll miss him very much while he's away.
No. 2
M: Would you take this suit to the ( dry ) cleaner's?
F: But I picked it up from the cleaner's the other day and I ( still ) haven't
put it on.
M: I know, but it didn't get this mark out.
( Q. Do you have another expression? )
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Will you ( Are you going to ) join Ken's going-away party this Saturday?
F: Why ( all ) the fuss? He is going to be away just a month, isn't he?
M: Right. But I'll miss him very much while he's away.
No. 2
M: Would you take this suit to the ( dry ) cleaner's?
F: But I picked it up from the cleaner's the other day and I ( still ) haven't
put it on.
M: I know, but it didn't get this mark out.
( Q. Do you have another expression? )
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Excellent! One point, though. "?
- Excellent!
- One point, though.
- "?
- M might answer: I know, but they didn't remove this stain.
- )
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3 Answers
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Excellent! One point, though. If the suit belongs to M, then shouldn't F say, "...and YOU still haven't...."? M might answer: I know, but they didn't remove this stain. (You're 100% correct in using "it" for the dry cleaner's (shop), but many native speakers might say "they" -- perhaps thinking of the store's employees rather than the business itself.)
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M: Were you able to join Ken's despidida party this Saturday?
F: Where he goes? Is he leaving us?
M: Yes, He leave us just a month.
F: Alright. But I will miss him very much while he was away.
(Note: Be sure your dialogue is complete.)
No. 2
M: Would you please take this suit to the laundry shop beacuse my t-shirt has stain? or Would you plea
F: Where he goes? Is he leaving us?
M: Yes, He leave us just a month.
F: Alright. But I will miss him very much while he was away.
(Note: Be sure your dialogue is complete.)
No. 2
M: Would you please take this suit to the laundry shop beacuse my t-shirt has stain? or Would you plea
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